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Guest Post: Living with the Dreaditor

G'day dear readers. Join myself and fellow editor Liz Broomfield at LibroEditing today where I'm discussing the trials of being both a professional writer and editor. A sneak peek:

We all know that voice. The one in our head that says, “My Godiva, woman, did you really just string five adjectives in a row to describe your character’s appearance?” Or, “What-what-what!? You do know that dangling modifier makes you sound like a complete goon, right?” We’ll call that voice “The Dreaditor”—the evil, amorphous being that skulks within the crevasses of our brains and tries at every turn to squash our creative voice into so much jumble-y pulp.For a lot of writers, the inner editor is worse than having Spock after he’s downed ten cups of coffee quoting bad lines from Star Trek directly into our ears in a bid to create order out of our creative chaos. “Are you sure it isn’t time for a colourful metaphor?” ~ Spock,”The Voyage Home” Or, “Nowhere am I so desperately needed as among a shipload of illogical humans.” ~ Spock, “I, Mudd”). Continued here.

Liz asks some very compelling questions that I thought I'd pass on to you all as well. Do you also hear the voice of your Dreaditor every time you write? How do you manage to not let it stifle your creative flow? Can you edit as you go along?

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Smashwords TOC Formatting on Mac OSX with MS Office 2010 Explained

The Smashwords Style Guide does a superb job of explaining exactly how to reformat your MS Word document to conform to their submission guidelines—if you're using MS Office for PC. But! If you're on a Mac using Office 2008 or 2010, there's a giant hole in the explanation of how to create your Table of Contents. And of course, with no TOC, your document cannot be accepted in their Premium Catalog, thus not distributed to external retailers like Sony or Apple. Has anyone else had this problem?In brief, the Smashwords instructions for creating your TOC are:

  1. Manually type out your TOC headings (which are probably your chapter headings, as well as your title page, epigraph, prologue, etc.) at the beginning of your document.
  2. Go to each chapter heading or document section, highlight it, and choose from your menu or ribbon Insert -> Bookmark.
  3. Return to the opening TOC and individually highlight each manually-entered TOC entry. Once highlighted, right click, choose Hyperlink, and select the Bookmark label you assigned to that specific item. You should see this menu after you choose Hyperlink.However, if you're on a Mac, you see this menu.

See the difference? There is no list of Bookmarks and no option to hyperlink to one.After a series of almost comic emails between Smashwords tech help and I, their final response was (apparently, since they never sent me a final response), "Sorry, can't help you." I guess no one at Smashwords uses a Mac. However, through trial and error, I figured it out and am glad to be able to share it with you.Here goes.

  1. Follow steps 1 and 2 above as described more fully in the Smashwords Style Guide to create your bookmarked chapter headings.
  2. Return to your manually-created TOC at the beginning. Highlight the first entry and right click on it. You will see the floating menu with the highlight option. Click on Highlight.
  3. Here's where things are different. As illustrated in the screen capture below, you'll need to add your Bookmark names to the "Link to:" field, starting with the pound sign (#). In geek-speak, your Bookmark is called an anchor and you're linking to it. You need to enter the Bookmark name exactly as you a typed it when you created it. Of course, the issue here is that you can't actually see the names you already created, so you'll either need to write them down separately or remember them. (NOTE: If there is a way to see them, I'd really appreciate it if you would send me that information in the comments. Thanks!) If things are working as described, the "Display:" field will auto-fill with what you've highlighted, and the "Anchor:" field will fill in as you type in the "Link to:" field.
  4. Choose "Enter" and voilà tout! You have a TOC entry that now correctly links to that chapter headings in your document. Repeat by linking the remaining TOC entries to their respective chapter headings or document sections, then link each of the chapter headings and sections to the TOC as described in the Smashwords Style Guide, and you're done.

I hope folks find this helpful. Please feel free to send me any questions via Twitter at @TammySalyer or in the comments.

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Publishing Pains: Part Two

As mentioned in my last post, this post will be a discussion of the steps, software, and distribution sources I used to epublish my first ebook, On Hearts on Scorpions. Isn’t that egreat?Note, everything I’m going to talk about is based on the features and functionality of a Mac computer, but mostly it’ll be the same on a PC. This article also assumes you’re already familiar with the types of files used in ereaders (i.e., .epub, .mobi, etc.), and have a vague idea of their structure. If not, I recommend reading more on that here.The biggest takeaway is that, with a reasonable grasp of HTML and CSS, anyone can design and create their own ebook. This is a great option for someone who doesn’t want to, a) pay someone else to do it, b) lose the flexibility of having control over your own words and art; and who does want, a) to keep the maximum amount of royalties offered through distribution sources like Amazon and Barnes & Noble, and b) to save money and simply know what the heck it’s all about.First, a list of the different types of software I’ve used. Adobe InDesign ~ traditionally used to design printable materials such as books, newsletters, brochures, etc. InDesign works beautifully and mostly seamlessly with other Adobe products and can be the creation tool for extraordinary printed materials. However, as I’ll discuss, using it to create an ebook is a little like using a bulldozer to repot a houseplant.Sigil ~ my new favorite open source software. Sigil works like a text file application and will open everything in an .epub file (except the .ncx and .opf) to allow you to edit. The on-high-awesomeness of it is that it gives you three view options: the actual appearance of your final output file, a code view, and a split view. It updates in real time so you can see if your formatting is working. It’s a beautiful thing.Calibre ~ another handy open source tool that can convert your .epub or .mobi file into another format. It’s also useful for just serving as a free ereader for your computer. I primarily thought it would come in handy for converting my .epub to .mobi, but with the new Kindle 8 formatting requirements, I’m not sure it’s still an option.KindleGen ~ fortunately, this free program from Amazon does a good job of converting your .epubs to .mobis.Kindle Previewer ~ also from Amazon and integrated with the KindleGen application for viewing your .mobis. It's nicest feature is that it shows you what your ebook will look like on the different generations of the Kindle platform, including the new Fire.Adobe Digital Editions ~ the most recommended viewer for testing your .epub files. Free from Adobe.com.TextWrangler ~ a supremely sweet text editor for Mac. Allows multiple file editing and loaded with features that assist in code development.MS Word ~ for the epubbing biz, the most widely accepted word processing application.The ProcessI’d heard InDesign CS5.5 could output a book directly in .epub format and naively believed that its *cough* ease of use would make the entire process a breeze. In all seriousness, anyone who knows Adobe products knows that there is a steep learning curve to really grasping how to use all of their infinite features. Once you have a relatively solid understanding, however, things become much more intuitive. And this stayed true...until I saw the .epub output. Yikes!While it is true that, depending on how you format your InDesign document, you’re output is the precise file structure needed for an .epub file, the downside is that the more work you do on styling your document before exporting to .epub, the dirtier and more obscenely overwritten the HTML is. The software writes new HTML for every small stylistic tweak you implement and doesn’t unwrite it if you choose to back out of something. As a consequence, the CSS is loaded with so many generically named classes that it’s like a bowl of badly deformed Skittles. An example of their sloppy HTML is, instead of using block < h1 > type tags, it gives headers a < p  > tag and a “Heading” class. o_O As ereading technology is still relatively young, you can imagine the errors and issues this messiness would introduce across the many platforms.I was able to buy the Adobe Creative Suite CS5.5 (with InDesign and Photoshop, plus a couple of other Adobe products) using a generous educational discount, but the average purchaser would have to shell out around $300 bucks for it. It’s not worth it.Biggest Takeaways: Use InDesign, if you have it, to output a very basic, unstyled .epub file, then use Sigil to make changes to and format it with specific focus on bringing the HTML to industry standard. InDesign also outputs to .rtf, which is handy if you’re planning on using Smashwords as a distributor. More on them later. Also, most ereaders do not support drop caps, so don’t waste time creating these.After many trials and errors with the InDesign output, I got a file I could live with and moved on to Sigil. The nice thing about Sigil is that it will open the guts of the .epub without you first having to convert the .epub to a .zip, then uncompress the .zip to get at what’s inside. The downside to it is that you can’t edit the .ncx (table of contents) or .opf (content and manifest) files, or add any new files, such as art or css templates. You can, however, add new chapter breaks (which are new files that you’ll have to then add to your .ncx and .opf files).After doing what I could in Sigil, I used TextWrangler (after the aforementioned conversion to .zip and uncompressing) to make final changes to all the files. The next big step was to recompress and change the file back to .epub, then convert the .epub to .mobi for Kindle. As many of you know, Amazon is the biggest retailer for ebooks, and if you want to be a success at self-publishing, you really have to play in their playground. They bought the Mobipocket reader software when ebooks were still relatively new and are holding onto this file format for the time being. Rumor has it, however, that they will move to the more universally accepted .epub format in time. Cross your fingers.My biggest mistake was reading the documentation for how to create .mobi files a little over a year ago, and technology, being technology, has changed. Therefore, I wasn’t sure if what Calibre once did to convert files from .epub to .mobi would still be viable. Fortunately, as mentioned, Amazon has made the KindleGen conversion and Kindle Previewer software freely available to download, and they worked perfectly. Amazon also provides some of the best instructions going for how to get this step done. I’m not sure Calibre would ever be needed at this point, but it’s still nice to have as a back-up to the Adobe Digital Editions viewer. Here’s why:Your .epub output from InDesign and Sigil work seamlessly with the recommended Adobe Digital Editions viewer. But after unzipping-rezipping the modified .epub originally exported from InDesign, it can no longer be viewed with Adobe DE. I have no idea why this is, and it frustrated me for awhile. After trying a few fruitless ideas, I brought the modified .epub into Calibre and set the conversion instructions to convert from .epub to .epub. It worked fine in Adobe DE afterwards. My instinct is that this may be a problem that’s exclusive to a Mac.Biggest Takeaway: The more tools you have in your toolbox, the more likely you are to get what you want, and the more troubleshooting options you have to draw from.Brief as that rundown of the software is, the fact of the matter is that you’ll have to patiently test-retest-re-retest and re-re-retest your own files before they’ll be ready to submit to Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or the iBookstore. The easiest distributor of all to work with is Smashwords. In fact, they are so simplistic in their standards for submission that they won’t even take an .epub file. With Smashwords, it’s MS Word only.Quick rundown on the distribution channels I’ve explored (I'm sure there are others that I haven't):Amazon’s Kindle Direct Publishing (KDP) for Kindle ~ author royalties at 70% (for this and all following, these figures are as of this writing and will certainly change as ebooks become more the norm).Barnes & Noble’s PubIt! program for Nook ~ author royalties for ebooks with a list price at or between $2.99 and $9.99→ 65% of the list price. For ebooks with a list price at or below $2.98 or at or greater than $10.00 (but not more than $199.99 and not less than $0.99) → 40% of the list price.Apple’s iBooks ~ author royalties at 70%.Smashwords ~ author royalties at 60% if sold through distribution partners such as Amazon, 80% if sold through Smashwords.Bookbaby ~ 100% royalty to authors after an up-front fee of $99 and up.More discussion on the royalty wars can be found here, here , and here.Though on the surface Book Baby seems to be the best deal given it’s 100% royalty return, I decided not to use them for simple reasons: loss of control on the book creation, and they charge more for every incremental additional feature. For instance, should you go with their basic $99 package, if the first file you give them doesn’t turn out right, you must then pay for revision. If you require multiple revisions, you automatically go up to the $199 premium plan. So, before you even get your book published, you’re out $200. Also, you pay them $19 for an ISBN, which is a requirement to distribute with Apple or the Sony Reader, but this price only applies if you use their services to create the ebook. A single ISBN costs $125 and a batch of ten is $250. So, for approximately the same price as Book Baby charges for a premium plan, you get ten ISBNs instead of one, plus retain all the flexibility and control of each of your books’ creation and modification.I should mention that there is, of course, an ample time commitment for learning all of the tools and standards, but once you’ve done it, you’ve done it. And think of all the geeking out you get to enjoy! You’ll only add to your knowledge as the technology changes and advances, but it will always cost you the same: nothing.Once I had my .epub and .mobi files, Amazon and Barnes & Noble were quick and painless to upload, test, and distribute through. They each had my book on their sites within twelve hours.After getting those two going, I turned my attention to Apple. Apple is the least helpful, and I have not yet succeeded in getting my book up in the iBookstore catalog. The error messages delivered through their proprietary uploader are painfully vague. Instead of beating my head against them, and knowing that Smashwords is an approved Apple iBook aggregator and part of their distribution network, I decided to move onto the task of reformatting my book for Smashwords, and just accept the 10% reduction in royalties from any book sold through the iBookstore.Smashwords is a little like that mothball-smelling, blue-haired, high school math teacher that you had to be polite to because your parents taught you to be nice to your elders, and if you didn’t, you’d flunk ninth grade. It is a great option for authors who want to self-publish thanks to their nearly Luddite technological requirements, but their website is clunky and their service is slow, slow, slow. It’s been almost a week since I submitted my book file to them, and it still sits in the review queue. Additionally, emails to their help department have gone unanswered. Thus, I have no idea what the finished product will look like.The reason I call them almost Luddite is because the only type of file they will convert from is MS Word .doc (not .docx). Therefore, none of the work you did to create your .epub file for other distributors can be applied, and you have to completely strip and reformat your document—including things like complex MS Word styles, and even italics or bold fonts—then reapply them using Smashwords’ strict guidelines. Going from MS Word to an .rtf text file to strip out all of Word’s under-the-hood code, and then putting the document back into Word to employ Smashwords’ guidelines is the most reliable option. If you’re handy with Word, this isn’t too terribly bothersome, but if you’re using Open Office or other word processing software, or are not even sure what a Word style is, it could get very cumbersome.Then there is this: all ebook distributors require an interactive table of contents (understandably). Smashwords has guidelines for how this must be created in your Word file using bookmarks and hyperlinks, but (I don’t think they know this) you must have MS Word for Windows. Word for Mac does not have the required features for accomplishing their requirements. This is the issue I’ve emailed them about and not received a response. Fortunately, I have access to a PC that would allow me to complete this step.The really nice thing about Smashwords is their coupon feature that allows you to reduce the price or make free copies of your book for special people or for promotions. They are also very flexible as to how you want your book distributed; for instance, you can set it up to distribute to Sony, Kobo, and Apple, but continue to manage your own distribution to Amazon and B&N. Sweet.This is a giant bombshell of a post and I commend anyone who got all the way through to the end. There is so much more that can be discussed for each of these points, but it would be an endless conversation. I encourage anyone who wants to know more about self-publishing in general, and epublishing specifically, to visit the blogs of JA Konrath, Bob Mayer, David Gaughran, and Barry Eisler (whose name always makes me think of Bernie Eisel, but that’s a whole ‘nuther topic). I hope folks get some helpful information from this post, and feel free to continue the discussion, point out any mistakes I may have made, or post questions in the comments.**For an update and the Final Word on the process, please visit this more recent post.

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Publishing Pains: Part One

Old books - Stories From The PastIt happened. The book thing. Finally. Happened. And wow, believe me when I tell you, the easiest thing about self-publishing is doing the writing. Think of all the work a publisher does that you, as a writer, never have to worry much about. Typesetting, image and cover creation, editing, ISBN purchase and assignment, distribution, and *gulp* marketing. This writing gig is definitely a full-time occupation, and that’s for everything BUT the writing.But, it’s a labor of love. Why else would anyone do it? Don’t answer that. Love can be defined in many different, and let’s be honest, surprisingly crass and distorted ways. One of the genres I read and write in is horror, so I have a truly deep appreciation for these distortions. Which brings me to my first book.Just a quick history. I wrote a novel that was inspired by two of my favorite genres, science fiction and action, and completed it (as much as any book can ever be complete) about three years ago. It’s a really good story, you can take my word on that (wink, wink). I did the traditional things: submitted it to a contest (which it won o/), and shopped it out to a few agents with all the naive certainty of a fledgling writer. This resulted in a booming, yet polite, silence, to my utter shock.As I was going through this process, I tapped into the publishing world and tried to learn as much as I could about it. It is a bit soothing to the ego to realize that the reasons a book doesn’t get picked up are not completely based on the quality of the writing; it’s also very much about what’s “hot,” what can sell, what grabs an agent’s attention in the first place based on their subjective preferences, and many and sundry other factors. Almost no one read Moby Dick until a hundred years after Melville’s death. Perhaps he’d have had better luck if he’d taken the...um...whale by the horns and done the job of marketing and promoting himself. It’s possible.So as you can see, inevitably the arguments for epublishing began to work their way into the dark recesses of my brain, plant roots, and grow. The DIY punk in me could not resist the overall control that comes from being solely responsible for the babes of my own creation. Anyone who writes knows how far your own words sink into your psyche, and letting any giant, faceless, impersonal company twist them for their own ends feels a bit like pimping out your soul. Or maybe I’m being melodramatic. And maybe there’s nothing wrong with pimping out your soul. Who can say? Suffice it to say, after hearing the arguments in favor of being the master of your own publishing fate from such successful mavens of epublishing as Amanda Hocking, Barry Eisler, Bob Mayer, and Joe Konrath, I was convinced it was the right way. Which, again, leads me to my first epublished book.Patience! You knew I’d get here eventually. Anyway, my first epublished book was supposed to be the science fiction novel, but getting it ready has been a collaborative effort with Mr. Universally Talented, who is creating the cover, and who is also far more of a perfectionist than I previously realized. (The good news is that it will be out next month!) In the meantime, a writer friend, the zombie connoisseur Mark Morehead, put out a selection of his works as single shorts on Amazon and Barnes & Noble, and the light of inspiration went on! I have a number of short stories sitting around, some previously published (which have matured past the exclusive rights clause), some not. I’ve always felt a bit sorry for these little gems languishing in anonymity, and began to explore the idea of epublishing a few of them in a sort of trial run, a way to get my feet wet in the DIY process of creating my own ebooks. As I revisited my archive, I realized that I had four stories that shared a central theme: love and romance.Those of you who know me are laughing right now. The thought of me, the girl who makes gagging sounds at the mere mention of Drew Barrymore films or Nicholas Sparks books, actually writing lovey-dovey stories is pretty much a knee slapper. Never fear, I have not been possessed by naked, cherubic, arrow-slinging demons. These stories are about the aforementioned kind of romance: distorted, dark, and decidedly not chocolate-hearty-and-red-rosey.With the help of a number of friends, especially Jeannie Stevenson, and Mr. UT, these separate stories coalesced into my ebook On Hearts and Scorpions. It may not be Hemingway or Dante, but the blood, sweat, and tears that went into first writing the words, then turning them into a published work is very much a universally shared agony for all writers (okay, Ernie and Dante may not have had quite the same experience in regards to ebooks). In my next post, I will regale you with the details of the specific trials and tribulations of my process for getting the ebook in publishable format. I’ll discuss the software I used, including the pros and cons of each, the different distribution organization’s I explored, and what I learned along the way. For those of you considering going this route, maybe you’ll be able to take away a few helpful tidbits that will lessen the leakage of your own systemic fluids.

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How to Avoid the Red (Pen of) Death

Last week I read a blog post from author Molly Greene (@MollyGreene on Twitter) describing a method she uses to edit her manuscripts before sending them off for public scrutiny (and only an author, and maybe Rick Santorum, can truly understand the horrifying implications of the words “public scrutiny”). As one of those poor souls who agonizes for far too long over which word would be precise enough to describe something, or how best to leverage a comma to get my meaning across, or at what point to italicize vs. bold face a word, I have a deep and compulsive (obviously) appreciation for, at least, technical perfection in what I write. In other words, I cultivate and hoard editing tips the way gamers hoard Red Bull and joystick combinations (the last video game I played was on Nintendo, whaddya want?).Molly’s post got me thinking of the different ways I’ve tried to weed out every last typo, grammatical faux pas, and silly word choice in my writing, and I thought I’d quickly share them with you all. Let's start with her lesson, which is rather brilliant.1. Simply turn your manuscript into paperback format. This enables you to get a picture of the work that is as close as possible to how it will appear when it is a book (if you plan to publish in a print medium). Her post more fully explains the gist of this concept, which she originally borrowed from Christine Nolfi (@ChristineNolfi on Twitter) and gives step-by-step instructions on how to accomplish this with MS Word.2. I’ve heard from a number of authors that simply changing the font of your manuscript when you’re ready to do a line edit is enough of a visual “flicker” that your brain is able to see things it’s never seen before. This, of course, is incredibly handy when you’re going over a page for possibly the hundredth time, and every word you read is already inscribed on the meat of your mind like a cattle brand. When you look at something enough, you really do lose the ability to pick out details. We all know that feeling when someone in our critique group hands us back a red-penned copy of our last submission, every last extra word or typo gloating from the page as if to say, “What are you—blind and illiterate?” If you’re like me, you die a little inside when you see all that red pen.3. Which is why I tried this next thing. Because we humans have such sophisticated and helpful brains that enable us to comprehend things better by “autocorrecting” missing or misspelled words as we're reading, it truly does become somewhat impossible to accurately read our own work. For short pieces, a coworker once taught me that reading the project backwards will help suss out typos and misspellings. Imagine trying to do that for an entire novel though. Gah. Instead, what you really need are new words. Or at least, all the same words in your manuscript set out in a different order. Let me explain.Maybe this happens to you, too. When you start that final edit of your manuscript, you’ve read the whole thing so many times that you find it very, very easy to slip into a lazy mental cadence that fools you into thinking you’re already done, there’s nothing new to see. The story itself is so familiar that you’re really barely reading it anymore, your eyes just skim the paragraphs and relive the story, yet again. To break out of that cadence, I simply rearrange all the paragraphs in the story. This way, there is no storyline anymore; it’s all just a jumbled mass of unconnected paragraphs that are each forced to stand on their own.  This has helped me read each paragraph more closely, get a better sense of the way the sentences are flowing and linking, catch those missing words (usually articles like “the” or “an”) or inappropriately used punctuation, and assess overall comprehensibility.Here’s how you do it in MS Word (using Mac commands).

  1. Open your document and select all (Cmd-A).
  2. Go to Table - > Sort - > By = paragraph, type = text.
  3. Then start your edit. Here’s where personal preference comes into play. You can either print and edit by hand, or, like I do, use the MS Word track changes feature. The most important thing is that you save this mixed up document AS A NEW FILE.
  4. Once you have edited the entire work, the final step is to open up your “real” manuscript and start applying all of your changes. I generally search the real manuscript for key word phrases that happen in the paragraph I have to make changes to, then fix the mistakes.

Yes, this is incredibly time consuming. But if you don’t do it, who will?Lastly, I have a few elements I always check again. I do finds for all the following words and just make sure…

  • They’re, their, there
  • It’s, its
  • Your, you’re
  • May, might
  • Compliment, complement
  • Fewer, less
  • Each, every
  • Further, farther
  • Em dash vs en dash vs hyphen, making sure they’re all the type of dash they are meant to be
  • And you can add to this list with any other strings of words, characters, or grammatical ticks you personally have. Always, always, always give them one more check. If you don’t, a little more of you will die inside once the horrible red pen of death is let loose on your submission by your critique group or editor.

Incidentally, I also tried the “friend method" for editing, which was to send a single chapter of my first novel to a twenty or so different gullible schmucks friends, and ask them to proofread it for me. This had very, very mixed results. I definitely don’t recommend this method. Your friends will be frustrated with having only a disembodied bit of story to read, and you’ll be frustrated with both what they do find and what they miss. Remember, no one but grammar snobs and word nerds—like you and I—actually enjoy proofreading. Trust me on that.PS: If you find a typo in this post, I beg you not to print it, red pen it, and send it back to me. Funeral make-up really doesn't become me.

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